First-Ever IWSTI Commercial: Give us feedback!

HSPN.com · 04-22-2006, 01:10 AM

We invite you to share your feedback in this thread regarding the first IWSTI commercial.

You can view the IWSTI video by clicking on this link:
http://videos.hspn.com/?videoid=12

Thank you to all those that participated in our contest to name the newest addition to our video website.

jdmmuscle · 04-22-2006, 01:47 AM

Id recomend more agressive scenary ie track,canyon... and the music sucks but overall great idea. Keep up the good work

STi8 · 04-22-2006, 03:51 AM

+1 to music sucks, but everything else is awsome

Nis01 · 04-22-2006, 04:01 AM

Its a very good but very short video, gets the point across well. I agree with the above, if you were to make it a bit longer.. perhaps some aggressive shots or some boxer rumble would be in order.

Overall,

LOLSTi · 04-22-2006, 05:56 AM

It's very very loud. Besides that, cool.

STImachine · 04-22-2006, 06:33 AM

I like it. Very cool for a commercial.

lal · 04-22-2006, 06:44 AM

overall good impact, creates curiosity, visually exciting, strong easy to understand message. music syncs with visual, good job. suggestion for future, winding road, side shot of Sti, superimpose IWSTI logo over real car fade to logo with message.

SoaReS · 04-22-2006, 07:01 AM

I love it, but here's my input:

1. A bit too short.
2. Music is ghey

3. You need some tire screeching/turbo spooling action/sounds.
4. Different location, maybe winding roads?

BluSTi · 04-22-2006, 07:45 AM

+11 for ghey music. Good lead in for other commercials though.

BigJon · 04-22-2006, 09:47 AM

For a first try... I say its pretty good. Not bad... you ll get better with time! Just experiment

JJ18Sniper · 04-22-2006, 09:57 AM

Very good start. I'm usually not too critical on well made things, but the music needs to be changed. And I agree about the STi coming towards the viewer, the scenary needs to be more STi like (winding roads & such). Great job though!

305STi · 04-22-2006, 10:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SoaReS

I love it, but here's my input:

1. A bit too short.
2. Music is ghey

3. You need some tire screeching/turbo spooling action/sounds.
4. Different location, maybe winding roads?

+4 to all that

Kotka · 04-22-2006, 12:55 PM

All of the above +2
what about Saosin music

Quote:

Originally Posted by SoaReS

I love it, but here's my input:

1. A bit too short.
2. Music is ghey

3. You need some tire screeching/turbo spooling action/sounds.
4. Different location, maybe winding roads?

Mochenmat · 04-22-2006, 01:18 PM

i felt like i was being pressured into a colt with that music but sick vid

jason bouchard · 04-22-2006, 02:01 PM

i like it , upload it to google video i wanna put it up on my myspace

the music isnt that from a subaru commercal ?? or something like that

wo that would be great to have some turbo spool or blow off at the end with just the logo like a final F you im fast

04-22-2006, 01:10 AM	#1
HSPN.com Authorized Media Location: www.HSPN.com Posts: 553 IWSTI Addict since: Oct 2003 Trader Rating: (0)	First-Ever IWSTI Commercial: Give us feedback! We invite you to share your feedback in this thread regarding the first IWSTI commercial. You can view the IWSTI video by clicking on this link: http://videos.hspn.com/?videoid=12 Thank you to all those that participated in our contest to name the newest addition to our video website. This ad is not endorsed by this member. Please register or login to hide this ad. Last edited by HSPN.com; 04-22-2006 at 01:43 AM.

04-22-2006, 02:01 PM	#15
jason bouchard Professional STI Racer Car: 06 STI Fav Mod: the driver Location: NJ Posts: 628 IWSTI Addict since: Sep 2005 Trader Rating: (2)	i like it , upload it to google video i wanna put it up on my myspace the music isnt that from a subaru commercal ?? or something like that wo that would be great to have some turbo spool or blow off at the end with just the logo like a final F you im fast This ad is not endorsed by this member. Please register or login to hide this ad.

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04-22-2006, 01:47 AM	#2
jdmmuscle Professional STI Racer Car: STI Fav Mod: CE28-N Location: SFV,SO-CAL Posts: 680 IWSTI Addict since: Nov 2005 Trader Rating: (4)	Id recomend more agressive scenary ie track,canyon... and the music sucks but overall great idea. Keep up the good work

04-22-2006, 03:51 AM	#3
STi8 STI Driver Car: 05 Impreza \| STi Location: Arctic Posts: 244 IWSTI Addict since: Jun 2005 Trader Rating: (0)	+1 to music sucks, but everything else is awsome

04-22-2006, 04:01 AM	#4
Nis01 Professional STI Racer Car: '05 Aspen STi Fav Mod: Wingless Location: Richmond, Va Posts: 762 IWSTI Addict since: Oct 2005 Trader Rating: (4)	Its a very good but very short video, gets the point across well. I agree with the above, if you were to make it a bit longer.. perhaps some aggressive shots or some boxer rumble would be in order. Overall,

04-22-2006, 05:56 AM	#5
LOLSTi S204 Racer Car: RIP 02 WRX Fav Mod: 2004 Aspen White WRX STi Location: Cincinnati Posts: 3,614 IWSTI Addict since: Dec 2005 Trader Rating: (1)	It's very very loud. Besides that, cool.

04-22-2006, 06:33 AM	#6
STImachine STI Driver Car: 05 Subaru WRX STI Fav Mod: Spec C roof vent Location: Colorado Springs, CO Posts: 216 IWSTI Addict since: Jan 2006 Trader Rating: (0)	I like it. Very cool for a commercial.

04-22-2006, 06:44 AM	#7
lal Senior STI Driver Car: 04 STi (sold) Location: Pa Posts: 360 IWSTI Addict since: Dec 2004 Trader Rating: (0)	overall good impact, creates curiosity, visually exciting, strong easy to understand message. music syncs with visual, good job. suggestion for future, winding road, side shot of Sti, superimpose IWSTI logo over real car fade to logo with message.

04-22-2006, 07:01 AM	#8
SoaReS S204 Racer Car: 05\|WRB\|STi Fav Mod: Cobb Stage 2 Location: H-Town, NJ Posts: 3,796 IWSTI Addict since: Aug 2005 Trader Rating: (3)	I love it, but here's my input: 1. A bit too short. 2. Music is ghey 3. You need some tire screeching/turbo spooling action/sounds. 4. Different location, maybe winding roads?

04-22-2006, 07:45 AM	#9
BluSTi IWSTI Club Level 1 Car: 04 WRB STi Fav Mod: Me! Location: Montana Posts: 13,555 IWSTI Addict since: Mar 2005 Trader Rating: (0)	+11 for ghey music. Good lead in for other commercials though.

04-22-2006, 09:47 AM	#10
BigJon Junior STI Driver Car: 2006 OBP/g STi Location: Powell, Ohio Posts: 130 IWSTI Addict since: Jan 2006 Trader Rating: (0)	For a first try... I say its pretty good. Not bad... you ll get better with time! Just experiment

04-22-2006, 09:57 AM	#11
JJ18Sniper Silver Member Car: 05 Subaru WRX STi Fav Mod: DB 20G, Diamond Black BBS RE's, S2K retrofit Location: NY Posts: 4,638 IWSTI Addict since: Jul 2004 Trader Rating: (7)	Very good start. I'm usually not too critical on well made things, but the music needs to be changed. And I agree about the STi coming towards the viewer, the scenary needs to be more STi like (winding roads & such). Great job though!

04-22-2006, 01:18 PM	#14
Mochenmat Grassroots STI Racer Car: 2005 Subaru WRX STi Posts: 524 IWSTI Addict since: Feb 2005 Trader Rating: (0)	i felt like i was being pressured into a colt with that music but sick vid